Sunday, 16 December 2012

Made In Manchester First draft



This is my first edit of my Made In Manchester trailer. There is many problems with it. Firstly a lot of the shots I have used the camera movement is shaky, this is not a convention that is used in Scripted Reality, therefore I need to re-shoot these shots with a tri-pod so that the camera movement matches the conventions of scripted reality programmes. Another problem with my first edit is the sound. My background music prevents me from hearing some of the speech therefore I need to edit the sound so that I can still hear the speech as well as the backround music. My first edit has some positives. The storyline of the trailer makes sense and when I have the right clips will run as planned.
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  1. Unknown15 November 2012 at 03:58

    Good variation of shot selections, shots are steady in most scenes where neccessary but are also unsteady where it is also neccessary to be.
    Soundtrack to the trailer is good but undermines the dialogue in some scenes so it is unclear what the actor/actress is saying.

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  2. Unknown15 November 2012 at 03:58

    some sound issues: background sound and loud music. Good storyline, entices you to watch more. Maybe cut clips down so it isn't as long

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  3. HarrietJackal15 November 2012 at 04:03

    the music is really good but your background music is drowning out the dialoug so maybe have a play with the volume and you need your title cards and stuff, i like how the story like how the audience can understand the story line :)

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  4. Unknown15 November 2012 at 04:07

    Good use of shot types and good storyline. The soundtrack works well with the genre and makes you want to carry on watching. Try and reduce the volume of music and make sure all characters and lines are heard

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  5. Unknown15 November 2012 at 04:09

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    1. Aquinas College Media Studies16 November 2012 at 03:40

      Steph, your spelling and punctuation are dire!

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    2. Unknown18 November 2012 at 07:35

      Maybe the sound could start earlier for the scene to make more sense Also the first clip of the actors walking towards each other is too long and could be cut out.
      Some of the shots are very shaky and too noisy making it unprofessional and the music therefore over the top, doesn't sound right.
      Some of the shots, you cant hear the actors as the music is too loud. Also your editing could be more precise as the shots seem too long

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  6. Unknown15 November 2012 at 04:11

    In some scenes the background sound drowns out the shot and makes it hard for viewers to hear what the character is saying and some shaky camera movements. The soundtrack used will work well with the storyline when we re-shoot some scenes.

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  7. Aquinas College Media Studies16 November 2012 at 04:07

    Very good feedback, think they've said it all. You already had a good idea of what needed fixing any way. Make your edits sharper when you do your next lot of editing, there is too much space at the start and end of your shots. Good so far, well done :)

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